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Greetings, and Poem #1

I jostled, crowded as a cloud

That crams around the vales and hills
When all at once I saw a crowd
A host, of golden daffodils
In plastic pots, in sweety stalls
Sugared stalks, for brats to maul

Relentless as the feet that grind

Away the limestone of the hills
Hordes stretch'd in never-ending line
To taste the sickly daffodils;
A poet's vision, raped and sold
To line looter's pockets with tarnish'd gold

The waves beside once danced but now

Froth with waste from shoreview hotel
A "poet" could not help but howl;
What once was Eden was sold to hell
I scowled and scowled but little thought
What torment to me their sight had brought

For now when in the hills I stroll

I see scrawled upon them in their stone
"To let, to buy, to rent, now SOLD"
And four by fours around me drone
And then my heart with sorrow fills
And pines for Wordsworth's daffodils

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Yesterday's Youth

It was just before Sunday lunchtime
that I opened the local gazette
Now limp lined and blanching,
once hot off the press,

Next door, they were having another -
no other way to describe it, a brawl
Yes, that’s right, honestly,
the things we hear when we put a glass against the wall

I settled down, flicked open the paper
I see they’re closing that 55 bus route,
Marjorie, I shouted, no answer,
Wives these days. Never even cleans my boots

Anymore, anyway, what else’s
Going on? Another wind farm up on the downs
Bloody liberals taking over
This country, I tell you, you know who it’s run by? A clown.

And what’s this? Oh, what a surprise
Teenagers, again. Knifing each other I suppose
Or texting themselves into cancer,
Or sniffing glue wearing stupid clothes

Last week, this same reporter, I think,
Was telling us all about how
These bloody delinquents, know what they’re doing?
Worshipping a crack addict now

I think to myself, this journalist
He’s one of the good guys. He knows
What I want to hear
About how these youngsters are killing themselves with beer

He obviously thinks like me, he obviously
Remembers his own youth
Remembers how he used to have a twenty nine inch waist
And have the laughing Lizzy Lonegan clinging to

His leathers. As they raced down Palmerston Avenue
On the bike that he’d borrowed from the laddish Jack McGabe
Remembers how in the Summer Of Love he danced to
Dylan, and was out of his soul on getting laid.

He obviously remembers the feel of his first kiss
The feel of muscles that work, the feel of unwrinkled skin,
The feel of the sweet caress of hair that falls past your ears
The ohsobittersweet memory of that night in the back bedroom of 5 Mornington Crescent

He’s obviously like me
Out of his mind with jealousy and resentment
At these young under twenties, in their tight jeans,
Hooded tops, daft fringes, studded noses
With their whole lives ahead of them

While he’s stuck there, in his sixties
Tapping out roll after roll
Of his mid life crisis
Into the centre fold

This journalist
Now I can trust him to tell me the truth
About the moral debauchery, the maddening delinquency
Of today’s youth

About me
I am a creative
Age: 19
I live in Aberdeen - United Kingdom 
Last online: 02/06/2008
I've been here:   London town Scotland Paris Barcelona Southern Spain
I want to go here:  Canada New York Vancouver Grand Canyon The Missisppi Austrailia
I enjoy these activities:   Play my guitar do up old jeans and t-shirts Muck around with photography write walk in the hills Read paint sketch joke socialise - yeah that does mean drinking
My favorite books are: Anything by George Orwell - Road to Wigan Pier 1984 Animal farm Catch 22 Strange Meeting Goodbye to All That On The Road Suicide In The Trenches Dulce Et Decorum Est John Betjeman Trench Poets Of Mice And Men The Grapes Of Wrath William Blake - especially London and A Little Boy Lost Coleridge Rousseau Hunter S Thompson Dostoevsky
My favorite films and tv shows: Withnail and I etc etc
I really like these kind of bands:  Bob Dylan Velvet Underground The Smiths Morrissey The Libertines Pete Doherty Razorlight The Beatles The Clash Jimi Hendrix Bo Diddley Woody Guthrie Jacques Brel David Bowie The Kinks Lupen Crook you get the gist huh
I play these sports:  Yeah right
What I'm looking for:
to meet other writers, to make new friends, to show my work, to engage in intellectual debate,
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soo...
It's been dead here for awhile, I admit it. Really it's up to you to help spread the words, I built it and hoped that you'd come, but sadly google rules the universe now and we're competing with 3 trillion (and growing) other websites. The question is... should we keep going? Is there anything you want to add/remove from the site? Are any of you talented web designers or coders with some spare time on your hands and want to promote fullmoonemptysportsbag.com on facebook or myspace or bebo or the other plethora of so-called 'social' networking sites? This is a community and you should have a say too...peace and hana hou... x
Posted by: dogma 31/07/08 00:07
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hi becki...

so i added a blog explainig a bit more about what it is we are trying to achieve here... if you feel like you wanna get more involved read my blog !!

woof (thanks in dog)

 


Posted by: dogma 19/07/07 23:07